Bay Smith is a main character. Once a guy, she was turned into a girl several years ago. She keeps this fact a secret, and only a handful of people know.
She's now a struggling actress whose roommate is actually her daughter from an alternate future timeline.
Okay, this just keeps getting more confusing. First Brad/Bay is with his friend, then they go blonde, then she disappears, and now Bay’s back to normal? What is going on here?!
I guess the hints didn’t work out, so I’ll just put it down.
1st, Brad was with Trav(Brad’s friend), but Trav lost track of where Brad was while talking.
The Blonde Bay look-alike is not actually the Bay we’ve been following in the story, she’s another character (who we will learn about more in the NEXT story).
The Blonde, was being chased by Honey. She ducked into the cemetery and hid with Trav (whom she bumped into).
Honey WHILE looking for the blonde, see Bay.
As for Bay getting her memories back, she’s slowly been gaining her memories in the form of dreams since she she flew to Canada.
I kind of figured there might be some confused people, hence the Confused comment in the past comic. I hope that helps clear things up.
Oh, I realized all of that quite easily, but what’s especially jarring is the second Bay who just came out of nowhere. I know it’s a set-up for the next story though, but meh.
Is it REALLY that hard, just to say, ‘ “Your” is a possessive. It should be “You’re” in Panel 4. ‘
I mean, I do occasionally learn with constructive criticism and half the time, I’m trying to pump out the comic before it’s late so I miss the occasional YOUR vs you’re. This comic was made while I spent most of my weekend building up the SailorSun.org buffer so no updates would be missed while I’m away for the next week.
So why feel the need to poke at me with snide little remarks?
I always wondered why artists and particularly web-comic creators go into slumps and hiatus all the time… Now I get it, constant belittling.
Last time someone poked fun at me for spelling, I didn’t feel like making a comic for over a week. Fortunately I had a week’s buffer set up before the smart ass remark, so other then losing my buffer there wasn’t really any missed updates and no one really noticed.
So why do grammar-Nazi’s feel the need to belittle and degrade someone who’s only crime is attempting to make something someone might enjoy reading?
No, it’s really not that hard to say it nicely, but saying it nicely in the past hasn’t given you any incentive to learn, improve or even correct the glaring errors in so many of your comics.
As for not being late, why bother making a schedule so difficult to keep? This isn’t the first time you’ve blamed your arbitrarily tight comic schedule for the poor quality of work.
And speaking of the quality of work. Quite frankly, the artwork is only slightly above abysmal, and in the five years you’ve been drawing this comic, you’ve shown very little improvement, and none over the past couple years. There’s also a significant lack of consistency in drawing your characters, even from one frame to the next, and many people are simply shapeless blobs.
Your story is confusing at best, and utter nonsense otherwise. How many unresolved threads do you have going at once, and why do you keep starting new ones without closing old ones? I’ve read through your archives again and again and I still can’t make heads or tails of the ridiculous stories. The only one that has any kind of closure is that insane “Helices” story-arc, and even that was disappointing. Do you even have a proper story in mind or are you just winging it as random, nonsensical ideas pop into your head?
Okay, this just keeps getting more confusing. First Brad/Bay is with his friend, then they go blonde, then she disappears, and now Bay’s back to normal? What is going on here?!
I guess the hints didn’t work out, so I’ll just put it down.
1st, Brad was with Trav(Brad’s friend), but Trav lost track of where Brad was while talking.
The Blonde Bay look-alike is not actually the Bay we’ve been following in the story, she’s another character (who we will learn about more in the NEXT story).
The Blonde, was being chased by Honey. She ducked into the cemetery and hid with Trav (whom she bumped into).
Honey WHILE looking for the blonde, see Bay.
As for Bay getting her memories back, she’s slowly been gaining her memories in the form of dreams since she she flew to Canada.
I kind of figured there might be some confused people, hence the Confused comment in the past comic. I hope that helps clear things up.
Oh, I realized all of that quite easily, but what’s especially jarring is the second Bay who just came out of nowhere. I know it’s a set-up for the next story though, but meh.
Need I say it again. Just roll with it. It’ll make sense in time. Or get more confusing… But that’s what the wiki’s for… Kinda
The blonde is a different Bay. Or someone.
I’m guessing Brad’s parents’ graves?
I’m super confused right now.
CD,you better give us(the views)a “dan it’ clear and easy to understand ANSWER!!
I agree with Duhwolf. Wait for it. All should be made clear as the story unfolds.
Time to bitch about language: “Your” is a possessive. Please fix.
Time to roll it into a fine tube and stick it in your ear.
Ok, question…
Is it REALLY that hard, just to say, ‘ “Your” is a possessive. It should be “You’re” in Panel 4. ‘
I mean, I do occasionally learn with constructive criticism and half the time, I’m trying to pump out the comic before it’s late so I miss the occasional YOUR vs you’re. This comic was made while I spent most of my weekend building up the SailorSun.org buffer so no updates would be missed while I’m away for the next week.
So why feel the need to poke at me with snide little remarks?
I always wondered why artists and particularly web-comic creators go into slumps and hiatus all the time… Now I get it, constant belittling.
Last time someone poked fun at me for spelling, I didn’t feel like making a comic for over a week. Fortunately I had a week’s buffer set up before the smart ass remark, so other then losing my buffer there wasn’t really any missed updates and no one really noticed.
So why do grammar-Nazi’s feel the need to belittle and degrade someone who’s only crime is attempting to make something someone might enjoy reading?
No, it’s really not that hard to say it nicely, but saying it nicely in the past hasn’t given you any incentive to learn, improve or even correct the glaring errors in so many of your comics.
As for not being late, why bother making a schedule so difficult to keep? This isn’t the first time you’ve blamed your arbitrarily tight comic schedule for the poor quality of work.
And speaking of the quality of work. Quite frankly, the artwork is only slightly above abysmal, and in the five years you’ve been drawing this comic, you’ve shown very little improvement, and none over the past couple years. There’s also a significant lack of consistency in drawing your characters, even from one frame to the next, and many people are simply shapeless blobs.
Your story is confusing at best, and utter nonsense otherwise. How many unresolved threads do you have going at once, and why do you keep starting new ones without closing old ones? I’ve read through your archives again and again and I still can’t make heads or tails of the ridiculous stories. The only one that has any kind of closure is that insane “Helices” story-arc, and even that was disappointing. Do you even have a proper story in mind or are you just winging it as random, nonsensical ideas pop into your head?
This post is to ‘Nobody Special’…If the comic offends you so much, stop. reading. it. Go find another website to troll.