859 : He Makes a Good Point Jan07 by Robert on January 7, 2015 at 12:00 am Chapter: Story 10 : Here and AfterCharacters: Berry, Trav Whoa, Trav! Careful with that 4th wall… └ Tags: Berry, Trav
I feel like it would have been a lot more off a hit with the bunch line if the last panel had a crumbling appearance in the corner, just a very small effect, nothing big.
Real world? Nice place to visit but I wouldn’t want to live there.
Berry should totally go her and bay’s sister could be the brides maids what a sight that would be.
Hmmm she could always introduce herself as a third “sister” . . .
However, because of her time-traveling she’s now older than Bay & Heather so she could introduce herself as the “first” sister.
Well, the 4th wall just got bulldozed down.
That happened ages ago with the character Steve, the narrator.
Steve has been gone for a while, though.
No I haven’t!
Oh wait, you’re talking about that other, much less handsome Steve. The disembodied voice.
Wait… if the fourth wall has been bulldozed down…
SOMEBODY CHECK TO SEE IF LINKARA’S OKAY!
Hah, you’re right! We better check with Poyo and Dr. Linksano, too!
But doesn’t the mere fact that he was there already mean the fourth wall had been torn down? I mean he existed above the panels.
Berry’s final word-bubble is missing an outline on its tail.
Ack! I remember noticing that when I first got the pages from CD, but I editeed this one a few days later, and forgot about it. I’ll fix it ASAP.
The Jeaniesbottle website appears to be down
Looks like it’s back up now. Thanks for the heads up!