Bay Smith is a main character. Once a guy, she was turned into a girl several years ago. She keeps this fact a secret, and only a handful of people know.
She's now a struggling actress whose roommate is actually her daughter from an alternate future timeline.
CD Rudd, were you influenced by “Steins;Gate” when you wrote this story? Something I’m hoping you’ll address in “Timey Wimey”, as was a factor in the other story, is how Bay is able to keep her memory of the other timelines while other people don’t. That detail is very important to the storyline, so it would help the story if you address the significance of this fact, because the memory is why Bay is trying to investigate or change anything. You can handwave the reason, say we don’t know why, similar to Steins;Gate, but it should at least be talked about.
Just before everything went wierd with the time stream changing shenanigans, Bay had an injection from a certain doctor to “help her memory”. It seems likely that prior to this there were many changes tha bay did not notice because she hadnt been concussed in those timelines and therefore hadn’t been given the memory mojo… It seems to me that only being able to remember a history that hasn’t occured for everybody else is a short trip to insanity. The story is commencing apace.
Go get him Bay its pay back time.
Geronimo and Time Travel. This feels influenced by the best British T.V. show of all time.
CD Rudd, were you influenced by “Steins;Gate” when you wrote this story? Something I’m hoping you’ll address in “Timey Wimey”, as was a factor in the other story, is how Bay is able to keep her memory of the other timelines while other people don’t. That detail is very important to the storyline, so it would help the story if you address the significance of this fact, because the memory is why Bay is trying to investigate or change anything. You can handwave the reason, say we don’t know why, similar to Steins;Gate, but it should at least be talked about.
Oh, there is a reason, and It was revealed at the begining of the story for those who noticed it.
Just before everything went wierd with the time stream changing shenanigans, Bay had an injection from a certain doctor to “help her memory”. It seems likely that prior to this there were many changes tha bay did not notice because she hadnt been concussed in those timelines and therefore hadn’t been given the memory mojo… It seems to me that only being able to remember a history that hasn’t occured for everybody else is a short trip to insanity. The story is commencing apace.
Right through the portl!
argh. “Portal”
thank you for putting the song “still alive” in my head :(.