Bay Smith is a main character. Once a guy, she was turned into a girl several years ago. She keeps this fact a secret, and only a handful of people know.
She's now a struggling actress whose roommate is actually her daughter from an alternate future timeline.
he probably used premade sticky patterns that you can just apply to your drawing. Alot of artists do that, and it’s usually too much work for your trouble to adjust for clothing direction and stretching.
Contrary to what you seem to think, not everyone becomes a drooling idiot when big boobs are presented. So far throughout this “story” you’ve been presenting Bay in increasingly provocative ways, and only one scene has even been long enough for ANY plot development (and it was more of a “Duh! Really?” moment that didn’t reveal anything we didn’t already know.) In every other scene, the focus hasn’t been on the important details (suddenly realized by Bay in the aforementioned epiphany moment), but on what more skilled writers might use as Red Herrings.
The storyline has potential to be great, but it’s quickly becoming tedious. It’s time to move the plot along.
And really? “Ta-tas”? That stopped being funny in the third grade.
SECOND!!!! 😀 🙂
Okay was looking back at the back issues and I noticed a few things
1) I started reading and commenting later than I thought I had 🙁
2) Bays cup size isn’t all that much larger in comparison. Maybe I’m not really looking.
Oh forgot to comment on the redhead’s friend being her husband. I want to know about Robin or whatever that rival’s name was. What happened to her? Did Bay backstab her and steal her man or what?
I can think of one or two reasons why they might be bigger, and I think Bay is only going to freak out even more if they’re bigger for the main reason I’m thinking of.
If it’s the same main reason that I’m thinking about, then it won’t be as much of a bigger freak out because she’s gone through it already and this time she’s been female longer. Of course, her knowing who it is that caused it and that her current self had (more than likely) been willing this time…I take it back, it probably will be a much bigger freak out.
You might want to avoid using patterns on characters’ clothing until you can figure out a way to get the patterns to follow the folds of the clothing.
he probably used premade sticky patterns that you can just apply to your drawing. Alot of artists do that, and it’s usually too much work for your trouble to adjust for clothing direction and stretching.
Bay’s groping her ta-tas and your more concerned about the Pajama pattern?
Contrary to what you seem to think, not everyone becomes a drooling idiot when big boobs are presented. So far throughout this “story” you’ve been presenting Bay in increasingly provocative ways, and only one scene has even been long enough for ANY plot development (and it was more of a “Duh! Really?” moment that didn’t reveal anything we didn’t already know.) In every other scene, the focus hasn’t been on the important details (suddenly realized by Bay in the aforementioned epiphany moment), but on what more skilled writers might use as Red Herrings.
The storyline has potential to be great, but it’s quickly becoming tedious. It’s time to move the plot along.
And really? “Ta-tas”? That stopped being funny in the third grade.
SECOND!!!! 😀 🙂
Okay was looking back at the back issues and I noticed a few things
1) I started reading and commenting later than I thought I had 🙁
2) Bays cup size isn’t all that much larger in comparison. Maybe I’m not really looking.
Oh forgot to comment on the redhead’s friend being her husband. I want to know about Robin or whatever that rival’s name was. What happened to her? Did Bay backstab her and steal her man or what?
I can think of one or two reasons why they might be bigger, and I think Bay is only going to freak out even more if they’re bigger for the main reason I’m thinking of.
If it’s the same main reason that I’m thinking about, then it won’t be as much of a bigger freak out because she’s gone through it already and this time she’s been female longer. Of course, her knowing who it is that caused it and that her current self had (more than likely) been willing this time…I take it back, it probably will be a much bigger freak out.
Huh, the changes actually beginning to affect her own body now… and she’s losing time.
Would it have been any better I wonder if she’d ended up in bed with that woman I fear I forgot the name of (^^;) I wonder…
I KNEW IT!!!
her boobs are getting bigger!
seriously though, i thought it was my imagination.
At least Bay didn’t end up in the bed naked, or world-jump while her counterpart was being intimate.
Maybe this is a universe where Robyn was Sailor Sun and she was the sidekick instead? I don’t know.
This is getting confusing. I’m guessing Bay is going insane, and this incarnation of her insanity got implants.